Hopefully you guys will at least say its ok. Not one of my best so if it is good then please do say so!
Thanks for reading! I`ll be posting more on my blog, Just visit my profile and click visit website!

The waves rolled in they crashed the stony beach of Stoeaway Cove. The wind howled around the girl as she stood there looking over the sea. It swirled, rippled and rose to cause foam leaping from the waves and being swept by the wind to the girls face. She looked at her watch, He was late. As usual. Beth didn't`t like the place. Like all places they had met it was eerie. The wind was howling and lighting illuminated the beach. There was another flash. She was looking down the beach. Beth thought she made out a figure, a cloaked one. This was the last place she wanted to be. Her clothes were soaked through, clinging to her like they were afraid of the night too! Then out of nowhere, the sound of a recording being turned on. There was crackles, Then Glen Miller came on with Moonlight Serenade. She whirled around. Beth made out a faint light about 500meters down the beach. It looked like a house. As soundly as the music started, a high pitch scream cut through the night. She made out the black hooded figure leaving the house. Beth feared the worse. She now had the urge to scream. However, She could sense somebody behind her. Beth heard the steps get closer and closer. She saw from the reflection in the water who was behind. Now she knew it was all over…

Sequel plz?

dun dun dun....

Nice job. A bit short though.
Gave it a 8/10.

Thankyou all, I`ll consider writting a sequel.
Anyways to improve this apart from making it longer?

Give it an anti-climax at the end

who was behind her i hate u u got me hooked on the story 10/10

It doesn`t keep people hooked. *cough* Strrox *cough*



Wow, Is it that good?

I`ll be writting some more. I may post it on MSW but it was definitley be on my blog.
Thanks for all the comments.

Well. You can't really make that longer because it's just a description about the setting, the character, yada yada, no need to add dialoug as theres only one person. I'm hooked. Gimme another sequel.