Eh..

Oh, that's pretty nice. The diagonal lines are a bit unnecessary around where it is solid.

You're definatly getting better.
I'm not sure the border fits very well though.

I would get rid of the scanlines (diagonal stoof) and possibly try a different color for the text so that it blends more?
Good job though

Nice job!
Like spire said, Different colour for the text would be my advise. I like the picture though!

awesome.

Well, I thought the Border and scan lines would add on to the piece, but I guess not;
On regards of the text, I couldn't pick a color matching because It'd be harder to see. I tried making the Text see-through (Lowering the opacity) to see if it'd match appropriately, the original color of the text is Black, because It was easy to see, but harder to change.