I would consider this my third fully edited videos, This one actually makes sense compared to my others.

Well I came up with an idea of this video and it turned into a series. Each episode would have a different skill.

Give me your opinions and tell me on what I should improve Thanks

you said jackass alot :P

I didnt really like the way it ended needed more of a cliffhanger

-felix

Pretty amusing :P

Thanks, Yea I bet I coulda made it end better, In my next video I'll think of a good ending

Hmm...
Looks good.
I don't even know how to edit...
I could be a helping hand for you. I have no skillcapes...

4/5
TOO MUCH SWEARING!!!!

-Pikk

I've tried to make Machinima's and comming up with a good plot is HARD.
You nailed it dude, It seamed very well thought out.

Nice video.

Just a word of advice, try to make all the episodes unique, it seems it could be quite easy for them to turn out to be all be roughly the same.

Well the way I planned them they will have a similar structure, But I have some ideas to make them unique

To be ruthlessly blunt I cringed through the whole thing. Don't let that disencourage you though - I find most Runescape machinimas bland and uninteresting - that's just my preference and I guess I would genuinely put it down to the director not having much to work with because of the limited game mechanics it's hard to make anything dynamic and worthwhile.

Constructive criticism would be to work on the voice acting - make conversation more fluent and believable AND condense the length of the episode because a long machinima is inevitably going to be a boring machinima. Also try not to get too preoccupied with conceiving a decent plot - I find that some of the best machinimas are funny because they deliberately don't have a storyline & if they do it's very vague and unimportant-- instead the focus should be on the disposition of the characters and how they react to a given situation or just the sheer outrageousness of the story itself.

Pretty funny watched it while doing my slayer task of owning trolls.

Hmm Yea I didn't really planned to have much of a storyline or plot, Maybe a couple little things, But nothing big. And Yea I do have to practice voice acting

barbie girl!? lol, that was the most funny moment in the vid, is that guy(fletching cape guy) really a guy? lol

Who knows


Is it just me or are more and more people getting bird icons?