Here is my entry. Not expecting it to win. I thinking of this video as more of a introduction to video making for me.
Please rate it honestly.



Tell me what you think, and what I work on in the future.
Yes I know it's a simple video.
Yes I know the music is to soft.

Omg darth thats hilarious!!!!!!
AHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAAHHA
I THINK I MIGHT JUST LAUGH MYSELF TO
oops

It was meh-ish but still funny. Was there music or something because I couldn't hear anything.

You really like it that much?

I tried to follow this video while making it.



@red5, yes there was music in the back ground. it was louder on the editor than youtube.

*Face Palms at some people*

I sure that some of those triangle answers were jokes from the other players.

Adding music may help out...

The fact that I had to lean in a foot away from my screen because I couldn't hear anything killed the mood before it began. The premise seems uninspired, (but after reading your last post, I guess it's now "unoriginal") and the poor grammar was very irksome. Make sure your audio works, and narrate it if you can. (although maybe you were, I dunno. ) And stay clear of NPC's.

It was okay.

Had to turn my speakers up full blast to hear the music and I didn't like the video quality. I also think you should have edited out the combat symbols.

It did make me lol pretty hard though when you were telling the guy how they changed the definition of triangle.

Overall, I give it a 6.5/10.

I was supposed to be in original video, I kinda like it more as a documentary, than as a play.

I thought random people looked better than actors. (there is on actor in my entry)

And I also changed the questions.