This is also what i sent in as my entry for the contest. Enjoy

The begging was kind of choppy and you could have had less of a pause after the characters finish talking. The ending is better than the beginning and seems like the editing wasn't rushed. I would rate it a 6/10. Good luck!

that was kinda cool, i looked on some more machinima vids and saw a cow one for the cows, and that was kinda funny lol

I was really liking it but then it got to the end. The end was kind of bad to be honest. I thought something more funny would happen :/

Was mediocre Sorry but will never win :'(

The spelling and grammatical errors were enough to piss me off to no end.

If I had to sum up my reaction to this video in one word it would be "gah...?"

Well I know it's way better than I could do.

Nice job dude.

It is rather mediocre, although I doubt I could have had that supreme editing skills.

Pretty funny. I doubt jagex will look through them all though :P