Searching for the light
Max Lipina

Searching forever for the light,
Marks of graffiti fill the night,
Silently walking and looking,
Upwardly reaching and stumbling,
Searching for the light.

Trekking to the next location,
Finding myself in permutation,
Traveling by train, instead of plane,
Believing the heart, one must part,
Searching for the light.

Arrives in due time only to find,
The darkness touching the mind,
Shapes ‘n blurs in the distance,
Refraining to act in temperance,
Searching for the light

I usually don't like poetry but this seemed like it flowed much better than the poetry I've read before.

Beautiful flow and a great poem. It brightened up my day and so I thank you for that.

I agree, an absolutely brilliant poem. flows well and the rhyming is good.

Thanks for the comments! I will try to make some more poems down the road here.

//Same topic, different poem.

The Truth

Searching for peace at night,
I started searching for the light,
hoping and searching,
waiting and learning,
that someday I will rest,
so I can know the light.

I usually don't like poetry too much... but both of your poems were quite good. They both flowed and they had a grand atmosphere to it.

I got my light from Ikea. I like the rhyming though its very pretty ;)

Religion


Searching for peace at night,

I started searching for the light,

hoping and searching,

waiting and learning,

that someday I will rest,

so I can know the light.