We had to write Poems in my Language class today. So I wrote one. And I actually liked it. Im not the best writer but I want to see what you guys think of it.

A fan
Used to cool us off
Used to dry our wet clothes
A fan
is like a hurricane
it blows around your lose papers as if they were debris in a hurricane
A fan
Used to cool down our engines so we can drive
Used to bring us up into the air
A fan
is like a propeller
it blows air in the right directions
so we can fly high
A fan
Used to move the air around us
Used to give us warmth in cold winter months
A fan
is like the wind
it allows us to fly a kite
or let flags fly high

By Sean Buchas

Lol I honestly thought you were gonna right about a person being a fan. :P Like a person that likes a show = fan.
It is not that bad, I am not a good writer at all. But I do miss those old poem battles that we had, it was mostly Ren and me that battled and no one helped me. >.<
XD

Yea. She had us write a poem about a object that we can relate to a simillie. Or how ever you spell. (not on firefox)



You should try and bring them back. I enjoyed the poems you wrote about me even tho they were supposed to be about Mechscape world.

That beats anything I wrote for english.

An interesting subject to write a poem!

Just a minor spelling mistake :) Better hope the teacher doesn't notice :P

Seeing as darth is right next to me, He is sorry for such a trivial error, and will aim to please you in the future :D

She doesnt grade spelling. Unless it's a typed report.

Oh, if a fan is what you mean,
then listen up my child,
A fan is bad, it is evil
It tags along behind,
The ol' working fellow,
not great nor bad
Is what it does not like,
but the thing it truely hates,
the thing it really despises
is if you go up to it, all pleasent, cheery, nice and clean.
And speak with a good Hello!