The morning sun was blazing over the everlasting sky. It rained for weeks but it finally stopped. The small, but significant village was crowded with Mortigans in the town's square selling useful items. You could'nt walk 5 steps in the town's square without an old mortigan lady stop by and ask you for some cider, (for a payment of course). Besides the fact that the mortigans were greedy; they loved thier sun the most, named Morton C5x. It was a sight seeing beuty and shines blue in the night.

One particular Male Mortigan, named Ren, was not like any other mortigan. He wasn't greedy at all. Ren was a poor vagabond who lived in the outskirts of the village. He sleeps usually where there is comfort. Today, after the rain stopped, he climed down from a shady willow and started walking towards the river on this certian spot with a rock that is shaped with twisted features. The color of the rock was ruby red and lot's of little mortigan plants grew beside it. This was Ren's favorite spot. He usually sat on the big rock to fish for morn. Morn were little fish-like creatures that swam in the purple river.

Everyday is the same. The reason Ren is poor because his father was killed in the war between the Pliigi, Humans, and Suls. His mother commited suicide because her heart broke into little peices. Since the mortigan goverment was also greedy, he stole the familie's money and threw the poor orphan out of the city. Ren wished this war never happened. He's been an orphan for a month now and nothing interesting happened...but that's what Ren thinks.
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1 day Ren was talking to a Crun, a small bird-like animal. The crun tweeted and flew away. Ren could'nt stand being alone everyday so he decided to kill the man who ruined his life and killed his father, but Ren regreted what he said a moment later. 1st of all, he is not even strong and he can get killed in 1 easy shot with a Blaster GX. 2nd of all, he does'nt even know who killed his father so it was basically pointless. 3rd of all, if he he was strong, and if he did know who killed his dad, how would he get to him?

These thoughts raced into Ren's mind for the past week...but he wasn't aware that his problems would be solved soon.
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Ren was hungry so he walked to the city. He walked for a long time so he entered a famous pub. The bartender was talking to some other strange mortigan who had black arms with dark body armour, and he was armed with a heavy blade...Ren stared amazed. He looked like a soldier. He walked to the bartender.
"Hello, excuse me but may I buy something here?" said Ren
"Wut yo wan' son? Where yer parents?" laughed the bartender who was still listening to the strange mortigan.
"I don't have any money but I can work for you if you want"
"I dunt accept employeez" said the bartender, "so get the hell outta my shop...your ruining my floor with your filthy feet."
Ren felt ashamed as some faces looked straight at him. He saw the strange mortigan next to him and he suddenly pinned the bartender on the wall, knocking some glass on the floor crashing. Now everyone was watching.
"Hey put me down!" cried the bartender.
"If you ever...EVER insult my brother in front of me, my blade here will taste your blood!" screamed the angry mortigan.
Ren was shocked. HIS BROTHER! He never knew he had a brother! Never! and now he's in a bar asking for food and his brother pops up...from nowhere!
"Are you really my brother?" question Ren, "and why have'nt I ever seen you before?"
"I went to the war before you were born. I heard that father died and how mother committed suicide. I came back from the war and got a job application as a spy. I was keeping an eye on you. My captain told me I was never supposed to help you. I don't know why but those were strict orders. I don't know why I am telling you this but I don't care about that order now. I just wanted to meet you in person." cried Ren's brother...and he picked up Ren and hugged him for a long, long time.

Great Story man I would love to see more

you know your brother cares when he pins a bartender to a wall... lol. I'm starting to like this story

Great ending, kind of a cliffhanger, is he really his brother or a guy just trying to get close to him?
Watch your grammar and you'll be great.

Find out in the next part

i read this and it's pretty cool keep it up.

It's quite a neat story, apart from the grammar issues. I like the similes and metaphors you use to describe things, it makes what you are telling seem all the more realistic. Keep it up.

Pretty good; keep practicing!