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It's pretty simple. The part that I don't like is that you have random lines in the back. Why?

I think that's the gradation.

Over all, it's pretty good, maybe add a server button?

Pretty good. I think the actual screen could be similar to this. Maybe it would be like that screensaver where it looks like you're going to warp speed or something...

It's OK, a bit similar to some other login screens. I personally don't think that the main font will be the same as the RuneScape font.

I swear ive seen this same one before.

not bad, keep up on this

Too simple really. You need to spend some time and maybe pixel in some Mechs or ships into the background. I like the way the game log-in menu matches the whole screen but I don't think the game menu is going to look like that.

Other than that, keep it up and use our posts as inspiration for another project. :)

Hmm... Maybe

yeah need more added then it will look prol33tftwhax