This is a poem I wrote for extra credit in my Literature class. Please tell me what you think.


The Protest

Born of nothing, of which it protests,
It bore a world in its wake,
Forged of the fire, of which it detests,
Man commands fire for his sake.

Looks good, though I wish you had made it a bit longer.

Thanks, but felt I had said all I needed to say, if I added more it would be droning on. I could try, but I'm not sure I'd know what else to add.

umm..its Ok. It kinda seemed ambiguous to me how you said "forged of fire.......man commands fire...." seems just a little odd how fire could be forged of fire?

I didn't say the fire was forged of fire.

I didn't expect anybody to get what the poem meant as it is sort of vague and short.