I've never seen you
Or touched your skin
I've never felt your lips
Or held you tight
But I know I love you

Not because of the way you look
Or because of that sexy voice
Not because of the things you say
But because of whom you are

When we meet I will kiss you
And hold you all night

I love everything about you
Because it's you

by Gary R. Hess


I met you on Valentines Day
One year five months twelve days I saw your face
You came down from heaven and opened my eyes

Your skin so smooth, so tender
Smile so bright, so loving

I have thought about you in every way
Just sitting and wondering about that day

We laughed, we smiled
We talked for a long while

That day with you was so great
And everyone passing is only more wonderful
I love you more now, than ever before

by Gary R. Hess

"And everyone passing is more wonderful". That makes me think every person passing them is better than her. Maybe you should fix up that typo to say "every one" lol.
Anyway, i'm not poet, but they're pretty good. I'm not really a big fan of this stuff though. Does it really make a girl love you if you say it?

Lol I think you know the answer to that.. NO it is just a way to express your fealings in a more moveing and passionate way. Some girls just find it romantic and that you care enough to say those things.

Why not say "Will you marry me?".
That shows that you care enough about her that you want to spend the rest of your life with her. Forgive me if i'm totally wrong about this whole thing. I'm not a romantic.

The first poem I could have related to, a few months ago...

You are right in someways but say you are not ready to get married and just want to let her know you love her. =)
You ever seen the dead poets society it does not have much to do with love but it may would help you understand poetry and it was a great movie.

You mean you were in love with someone you've never met before?

Lol you so just lost me mate.

-Nella Wafer

Something like that. ;)

Lol how can u do that?

Well have you ever felt love, with someone out of your family? There is a connection there, even when you are not with the person.

Yea but i have never felt love for someone i have never meet in my life..

-Nella Wafer

lol I never said I didn't met them in my life.

Im sorry lol im half asleep not reading stuff very well. Good night

WHAT LOVE IS LIKE, by Piet Hein

Love is like
a pineapple,
sweet and
undefinable.

The stuff Ren comes up with is always so Short 'n' Sweet! That must be how he owns everyone else.
(and i do realise he didn't make up the poem himself, i'm talking about the stuff he knows)

As short as that poem is it has alot of trust to in and I enjoy short poems they get straight to the point..
I don't understand why the writer of the poem chose a Pinappple out of ever fruit...

-Nella Wafer

Because it rhymed best with undefinable, perhaps.

I do beleave you maybe right lol..

I'm not one for love poems but this one is alright, I suppose.

That's called a stalker poem. Not a love poem

Get it right. :p
jk

It does seem alittle strange but to me it means love has more then one meaning.

-Nella Wafer

"Love is never having to say you're sorry.... but saying it anyway".

I love that.. Here is one for you..

Love is patient
Love is kind
Love is not jealous
Love does not brag
Love is not arrogant
Love does not act unbecomingly
Love does not seek its own
Love is not provoked
Love does not take into account a wrong suffered
Love does not rejoice in unrighteousness
Love rejoices with the truth
Love bears all things
Love believes all things
Love hopes all things
Love endures all things.
Love never fails

I dont like poems. but i didnt hate reading thoses so i guess they are all right.


(500th post)

That is familiar... isn't this in the Bible? O.o

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That is familiar... isn't this in the Bible? O.o
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Yes it is but i wrote the biblie lol =)

I'll make sure to remember that.

99Fisher: Biblie
Luke, John etc: Bible

Make sure you do lol.. Anyways back to poems....

-Nella Wafer