 Crush Is A Trickster, Posted a poem on it a while ago! |
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 Nov 2 2009, 07:50 PM
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 You Don't Wanna See The Sun Anymore.  Group: Donor Posts: 173 Joined: 4-February 08 From: United Kingdom Member No.: 1,829 Jagex Name: Fatalysm  |
 Crush Is A Trickster - This is a poem I've created, and the design above is recent and matches this poem. Turmoil presents me with it's finest hand. Heavy blow to this one articulate mind. Leaving no empathy for this dealer. Shuffling the last cards of my sanity. Forgive me not, for i haven't sinned. Or is one's burning crush, to much? Left to die, for sorrow does not show his head. It's not complete but I wanted you to associate is with the design. DA Link: http://fatalysm.deviantart.com/art/Crush-I...kster-142290997 --------------------  |
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Nov 2 2009, 08:04 PM
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 Made the kessel run faster than you.  Group: MSW Member +++ Posts: 761 Joined: 3-August 09 From: The Mars Bar Member No.: 10,873 Jagex Name: Flatypus |
Amazing, as per usual. I love your style!
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Nov 2 2009, 10:57 PM
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You Don't Wanna See The Sun Anymore. Group: Donor Posts: 173 Joined: 4-February 08 From: United Kingdom Member No.: 1,829 Jagex Name: Fatalysm |
Thank-you very much, I'm grateful of your attention to my work! This particular piece of poetry-based design was created mainly in Adobe Illustrator and modified slightly with Adobe Photoshop. I'd comment more on my style but anything I do as a style is completely accidental. I suppose I've got certain ways of working that i like that must contribute to the style of my work. Probably very heavily influenced with todays media from magazines and research to which could contribute.
Shall I create a version with a lighter background? It wouldn't be as contrasting but the more complex shapes should make up for that and divide attention? -------------------- |
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Nov 3 2009, 01:07 AM
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 2girls1kiwi  Group: MSW Member ++++ Posts: 1,587 Joined: 11-November 07 From: Above you. Member No.: 104 Position: Moderator Jagex Name: added99 |
And I will see your design's everywhere in a few years. :O
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Nov 3 2009, 05:12 PM
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Made the kessel run faster than you. Group: MSW Member +++ Posts: 761 Joined: 3-August 09 From: The Mars Bar Member No.: 10,873 Jagex Name: Flatypus |
QUOTE (Fatalysm @ Nov 2 2009, 10:57 PM)  Thank-you very much, I'm grateful of your attention to my work! This particular piece of poetry-based design was created mainly in Adobe Illustrator and modified slightly with Adobe Photoshop. I'd comment more on my style but anything I do as a style is completely accidental. I suppose I've got certain ways of working that i like that must contribute to the style of my work. Probably very heavily influenced with todays media from magazines and research to which could contribute. Shall I create a version with a lighter background? It wouldn't be as contrasting but the more complex shapes should make up for that and divide attention? Sure! -------------------- Proud GoA of the Federation and Crewmember of the Good SS Skype |
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Nov 3 2009, 05:44 PM
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 Mech  Group: MSW Member + Posts: 23 Joined: 2-August 09 Member No.: 10,824 Jagex Name: shruikan31 |
I'm loving the graphic art i think it's amazing and it does tie in very well with the poem. I do like the idea of sandwiched pieces of art and poetry though, it's something i may have to look into for my own work.
However the poems alright but it doesn't really move me at all, forgive me for being harsh, i just think the subjects too vague to flow into each of the stanzas, it just seems a bit bland to me because it doesn't really develop on any point in particular. But i fully accept it's a work in progress and it does show promise :) Good luck |
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Nov 3 2009, 10:58 PM
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You Don't Wanna See The Sun Anymore. Group: Donor Posts: 173 Joined: 4-February 08 From: United Kingdom Member No.: 1,829 Jagex Name: Fatalysm |
Thanks RawrCuddles. I appreciate your comments about the poetry and in fact agree :D.
T-shirt look any better? :P  
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Nov 4 2009, 01:11 AM
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 Invincible Mech Group: MSW Member ++++ Posts: 2,323 Joined: 6-April 08 From: Australia Member No.: 3,243 |
I personally think the vest and shirt of the Skeleton guy don't match the rest of the picture and should be lighter with outlines too. Everything has black lines emphasising the detail of objects such as the skull, EXCEPT the shirt which makes it look more like a skull was stuck onto an existing image of a shirt.
Great shirt though. --------------------  Thanks Kakashi for the great sig |
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Nov 4 2009, 09:00 PM
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Made the kessel run faster than you. Group: MSW Member +++ Posts: 761 Joined: 3-August 09 From: The Mars Bar Member No.: 10,873 Jagex Name: Flatypus |
I love the T-shirt!
I think the placement is a little odd though. -------------------- Proud GoA of the Federation and Crewmember of the Good SS Skype |
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